What can I do with a girl if she refuses to be mine?

I took this down about a week ago for some personal reasons, but after some tweaks and image adjustments I decided it was high-time to repost it.
The show it was for went off without a hitch, however, and I'm very excited to be doing another poster for an upcoming production.

I've attached a version with the text, of which I was only responsible for the hand drawn title at the top, but the billing and everything else was laid in by Ms. Bea of Girlie-Q Productions.
I almost like the composition more with the girl to the side and a taller comp.



I have some new work to post at the end of this week which I'm excited about. Keep an eye peeled, guys!